Denver Eye Surgeons

I need help on my story. Its due tomarrow. I am haveing a hard time trying to find an end. So say something that does not sound right and may need more attention. Please do not be crule of my story. I'v I worked for about five hours. (Also, I am not a good writer), I have more homework and I'm going to bed one hour.


"I could not believe it at first either! Yesterday she just stood still while everyone having a blast dancing on the Old Mans serious" Tristan laughed. "Poor Akira, she had not been a friend for a girl, uh, Kayla, I think, short of our house screaming, "You're a monster, Akira daffodil, a monster! Now she hardly left her room.
"I hope it is not so bad," I replied. "How did your grandfather die?"
"Sage is so boring, it runs into trouble. He did not die of old age"
"I thought that the murderers have been struck by lightning or suspended?
He thought of himself as a surgeon scientists on human subjects and many failures. Then he said "No harm has been done, as long as I'm doing this to help others, right?" Then the smile off ed. Just try to emulate him shudder. By the way, have you ever woken up with scratches on your body that was not there when you are asleep?
"Yeah, I have not. It is, like, you scratch in your sleep. How weird is that!" I smiled, drank the rest of my pop, and sat the patio. "It's dark. I need to get some shuteye for our trip tomorrow. "
"Oh, yeah, can not wait to ask my uncles died in the morgue!" Tristan said sarcastically.
The next morning, Tristan, his sister, Akira, and led me over 50 miles morgue Greenly, Denver to be exact.
There are 3 reasons I drove them. 1, I love them. 2, Tristan has recently been drinking and driving and got his license withdrawn. And three, their mother died when they were young. It has been found poisoned and nearly Tristan father Grandmaison. Everyone is convinced he has killed. Their father died a few days ago. Nobody knows how, but his lungs disintegrated.
We threw the corpses until someone said: "Ah! I found them, but nobody does. A man dressed in black came to us and said. "You must be at the infancy of the daffodil. My name is Nigel. I am your dad's secretary. I am, e-mail of your father. We are incinerated as we speak."
Akira calmly said, "Our father is dead. There is no possible way you could have obtained an e-mail from him. "The man paused." I'm sorry, but he did send. Your uncle died of a type of gas that decomposes their bodies inside. I am truly sorry for your loss. "
As we headed back in to Greenly, I decided to take a side street. The road became extremely twisty not to mention the road was on a hill.
"You okay? That must be hard for you" I took a second to watch Tristan. When I looked, it was like I walked into a horror movie. A stream of blood down his ears and his eyes as he wept blood. Tristan ar-"I was interrupted cry buy Tristan and Akira. I could not wait on the road. The car swerved the other way and about 20 feet ahead was a speeding 18 Wheeler. I froze as my life flashed before my eyes.
I cracked my eyes open. It was very dark outside. The blood was already rushing to the head. I was upside down. My head, dripping blood. I heard the familiar voice.
Sage, do you? " She demonstrates a flashlight in the window on the side of his face that shows minor injuries. The light has traveled to my leg. Then I saw my damage.
"Th-l'os," I murmured weakly.
"It looks like a compound fracture." She then shone light on Tristan, or what was left. His body had rotted.